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Tuesday, 1 May 2012

Media Evaluation - Thomas Moore

Part 1- The story of our films revolves around a young drug dealer owing money after it was stolen from him. So now he is seeking revenge to get back what he lost and repay the money he owes in fear of death. This is similar to the film ‘trainspotting’ (produced by film 4) which involves a large drug deal and ‘shifty’ (distributed by WARP films) which shows a drug dealer having his stash stolen and having to get it back, these are both British movies. The opening sequence of our film shows the two drug dealers Paddy and Barry, after getting ready in his run down house Paddy leaves but by coincidence runs into Barry and a chase begins from there. This leads to Paddy being chased down, beaten and told he has one day to find the money he owes ( unfortunately the latter never made it into the final two minutes of the movie)

Part 2- The target audience for our film would be mostly male teenagers older than 15 (our film’s certificate is 15) and people in their early twenties, it would also most likely appeal to people living in urban areas. Our film would also be most likely be viewed by a similar audience to films like ‘shifty’ and ‘KiDULTHOOD’ as these are of a similar genre. Before producing our film we submitted a questionnaire asking what people thought about our movie to blogger, YouTube [http://youtu.be/6b9yzCwWG6o and our personal Facebook pages, based on the feedback received we were able to understand our target audience and change any aspects of the film that weren’t desirable to them. We received feedback on the YouTube video that was uploaded and we were told “The plot seems solid. I liked the idea of the character owing money and having a limited time to give this, making the movie tense.” This was good because it meant that we were staying true to the thriller aspect of our film as our story added tension. The person who replied was also within our target audience age range (15+) meaning we were appealing to the intended group of people. On our facebook some people suggested that the too much money was owed so this took away from the realism, because of this we later lowered the amount the Paddy owes Barry.

 Part 3- Our film would most likely be distributed by a small British company such as WARP or metrodome mainly as this is a British film but also because these companies are known to distribute films which would most likely not appeal to a mainstream/international audience, and because these films are funded by institutions such as The National Lottery the production isn’t effected by investors wanting a large return so the actual film isn’t changed by someone else such as in the big American conglomerate companies. Because of there being less focus on profit films such as ‘This Is England’ are able to be produced even though they only appeal to a niche, British audience. Being produced by a smaller company such as WARP would mean the budget would be much smaller because they are independent companies meaning they have a lot less money which can be used, unlike studios like Universal. A theme with the smaller companies is that the films are more gritty and realistic; this is because they do not have a huge budget and cannot afford elaborate special effects or CGI, although this wouldn’t be such a problem with our production as it is a urban thriller so it is mainly based on real life.

Part 4- Our film follows a linear narrative (follows the beginning, middle and end rule) as opposed to a non-linear narrative which can shift back and forth through the story. The plot is established by the opening chase seen that is the premise for the rest of the film focusing on Paddy owing money. The genre of our production is ‘Urban Thriller’; we achieved this by filming our movie in an urban/gritty atmosphere and using locations such as the alley [Picture of chase road to right], also the characters contributed to the urban aspect of the genre with their clothes (trainers, hoodies etc) but also the way they interact with each other (bumping knuckles, meeting in alleys and the language they use such as swear words). To cater to the thriller side of our film we have a tense story focusing on time running out, but also the opening chase scene which is fast paced and filmed mostly freehand, this adds excitement because it makes it move faster. The use of fake blood is also part of the thriller aspect and the punch which is there to make the viewer ‘jump’ because it is fast paced and unexpected. Fades also added drama and tension to the slower scenes such as when Paddy is getting dressed, this also adds more of a contrast to when later in the opening sequence the chase scene starts and a lot of small, fast cuts are used. We used camera angles to focus the viewers’ attention on specific parts of what’s going on such as when Paddy is pinned against the fence by Barry. The continuity of our film is correct all the way through apart from the one shot of Barry shouting which was filmed at a different location; to make this less noticeable we zoomed in to show less of the surroundings. During our film the music is timed with the video so that the scenes change on the beat with the music, and also the music corresponds with what is going on screen. The sounds of our film are mainly footsteps/ running noise which adds to realism of the film, but also when Paddy is choosing which way to run and is punched, the silence adds tension but also the noise of the punch makes the viewer ‘jump’. As previously mentioned we made sure our characters were in run down clothes such as trainers, hoodies and jackets. Our use of props made the characters more believable by conforming to stereotypes of a drug dealer, by having things like ‘cocaine’ and alcohol on the table. For our titles we used a downloaded font from dafont.com, we did this because the default fonts that were available didn’t match the style and genre of our film. We experimented with different fonts before deciding on the one you see in the production, we didn’t want the size of the fonts to be too big as that wasn’t relevant. Instead we used a combination of fades with the titles to add tension to the film. We made sure that the iconography of film was easy to identify as an urban thriller by using a combination of the things mentioned above.

Part 5- Our film only features young males, at the start of the film we cater to stereotypes by portraying young males as violent, foul mouthed thugs who cannot communicate or reason, but later in the film they begin to communicate form a friendship and a plan. They also use their street knowledge/wit to get the money they need. This challenges stereotypes as this shows they can be the opposite of what I mentioned above. Because our 2 minutes only featured males we couldn’t represent a gender one specific way, instead we had to focus on representing the characters as individuals. We did this using class, Paddy is living in a scruffy house with newspaper on the windows, this makes him a lower class than Barry. We see Barry as higher up in society because he is owed money, not owing it and because he is chasing Paddy this means he has the power over the situation and over Paddy. Using sound we made Barry an imposing figure because he is loud and strikes fear into Paddy who remains mostly silent for the opening scene. In order to make Barry imposing but also make him easily identifiable as a powerful man and force to be reckoned with, we had him walk with confidence and be able to shout like he is the boss. We also conformed to stereotypes by having the ‘bad guy’ smoking. We did conform to location stereotypes by having using a ‘rough areas’ for the chase scene but also an alley for the drug deal which is covered in graffiti and seems out of the way. This also made the deal seem more shifty and dodgy. We also conformed to stereotypyes by having charecters using bad language and hanging out in bad looking places. We also used a rugged/grungy font to add to the urban feel of the film, the film has to look right so it can be identified as an ‘urban’ film.

Part6- Initially to attract an audience we created a blogger page for the production of our movie, we then shared this page in various places such as our facebook pages. We used questionaires to also get an audiences interest by asking them what they thought and giving them the opurtunity to give suggestions to what should be done with the movie. I think we have reached out to our target audience because our facebook pages have people which are the same age or younger than us, this meant we could talk directly to people in our target audience. Giving our audience an element of control to what would make it into the final movie drew people in, but we also made sure our blogger page and posts would be interesting for people to read by embeding video, images and links to other sites. An example of the target audience being intersted in our movie would be “I liked the idea of the character owing money and having a limited time to give this, making the movie tense”, this is feedback we received on our video questionnaire, posted on YouTube [http://youtu.be/UwXJmjKl__4]. This is another way we reached out to a larger audience. Some feedback we received on our production was that there were a few continuity errors, but enjoyed the tension created by editing at the solid story. I think we could improve the production if we did it again by planning our filming time better to allow ourselves more time to film things that need to be re-shot.

Part 7 – Post production we decided we would be filming our production on digital cameras which use tape, and we would use Apple iMac computers with Final Cut Express to edit our production. We decided this because theses were the resources available at college and it was a place the group could meet and edit together. Because all our work was completed and stored at college it also meant we always had it there when we needed it and it couldn’t be forgotten so it was easier to reach deadlines. We also used Celtx to create our script; college also provided free Internet meaning we could upload all our work to blogger. Because these facilities were free it meant less money had to be spent. The only aspect, which was difficult, was adjusting to using a Mac, rather than a PC. From our work I have gotten a better grasp of using Macs, blogger and also Celtx We used Celtx as it has features built in which correctly format the script correctly, one problem we had is that we could not copy and paste or script to blogger so had to upload print screens. Final Cut Express was used because of its user friendliness and the help available from tutors, which knew how to operate the program if we ran into any problems such as rendering.

Part 8- After completing our preliminary task we were able to learn where we could improve in future. Although we had one continuity error this is a large improvement from our preliminary task. We also learned how to plan a production and work more smoothly as a team to reach deadlines. Although we are not great we can also act better on camera now rather than bursting out laughing every time. In our preliminary task there was little editing needed, only cuts. But in our final task we used things like fades and titles so we have now improved our editing skills and can now operate Final Cut Express better and quicker. We are better at operating the camera provided and have gotten better at setting up a shot or scene. We also now have more knowledge about how angles can create moods and power so we were able to factor this into our final production.

M1 Opening Sequence Premier

Here you have it, the first two minutes of 'M1', a Scarlet Afro Production.
Tell us what you think below!

Saturday, 24 March 2012

Genre Reserach

Genre Research
Urban Genre
An urban thriller is a sub-genre to thriller movies mixed with urban realism. Urban or 'gritty' films are more realistic and often low budget (like our film) and rely more on a solid story and engaging characters rather than special effects such as CGI. This also ties into making a British film which is usually very realistic and deal with real life social issues. Urban have a very distinct style using things like bright simple colour schemes such as 'Trainspotting' (above), or have an urban style sound track commonly featuring rap or hip hop music like in 'KiDULTHOOD', an example of this can be found below.
The characters that feature in urban genre films are often criminals, delinquents or people that deviate from social norms, the characters could be things such as drug users or dealers (like our film and Trainspotting), young offenders, teenagers (KiDULTHOOD) or people that are unpopular with society.

The films mentioned above link into our film because of their distinct style, this is relevant because we will be trying to create a memorable style which includes our music and the visual aspects. Other films which feature a distinct a style are ones such as 'anuvahood' (above) with its soundtrack and bright colour.

Also a common setting for these films is that they take place in an urban setting with gritty environments which is something we are able to recreate. Combining this with the correct visual and audio style means we can create a film with distinct style while staying true to the urban thriller genre.



Thriller Genre
"A thriller provides the sudden rush of emotions, excitement, sense of suspense and exhilaration that drive the narrative, sometimes subtly with peaks and lulls, sometimes at a constant, breakneck pace thrills. In this genre, the objective is to deliver a story with sustained tension, surprise, and a constant sense of impending doom."

Above is the definition/ characteristics of a film which comes under the 'Thriller' genre. (definition from Wikipedia). This is relevant to the story of out film which is based upon the main character owes money and has a short frame of time to pay it back or he will be murdered. Time running out and the threat of death gives the viewer the feeling of 'impending doom'. But also because of the fast passed nature of our film this will create a rush and grab a viewers interest, these factors combined mean our film is also a thriller. The excitement will also be added to by the interesting visual style of the film and also the soundtrack which will be upbeat and fast.



Friday, 16 March 2012

Script For First Two Minutes of 'M1'



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This is the script for for the first two minutes of our film. The scene is written to be fast paced and grab the viewers attention straight away, leaving unanswered questions which will be answered later on in the film.

Thursday, 8 March 2012


Patrick 'Paddy' Mcgowen

About me: I’ve just been released from a youth detention center and I’m currently trying to turn my life around
 Family:  Disowned by my mother

Sex: Male
Birthday: 27 11 1992
Current City: Barnsley
Hometown: Wombwell
Relationship: Single

Interested in: Drugs n stuff.
Political: Far Right

Religion: Sado masochism

Activities: Drugs

Interests: Drugs

Sports: Sex
Music: Drugs don’t kill people, rappers do.
TV Shows: Police on patrol
Books: n/a

Tuesday, 6 March 2012

New Location

We have decided to change our filming location. Although the previous one had the 'rough' aesthetics that would suit our film it did not have the key features we needed for some important scenes. These key features include; a long alley with multiple routes, a built up area and long street.


This house will be used as the exterior to one of the main characters
houses.


The above images show the long built up street that will be used to the
film the chase scene on.

This image shows the entrance to the guinnel that we will film on for both the
the drug deal and chase scene.


This is a birds eye view of the 3 routes along the guinnel.


This location will prove far more easier and less problematic than the previously selected location although it is slighty more difficult to get to.

Friday, 24 February 2012

Research into title sequences

I am going to analyse 3 trailers to identify common themes and generalisations. Kidulthood
In the first 2 minutes of this film, titles show on screen. The trailer then begins in a school yard in an urban setting, this will be relevant to us as we are aiming to create an urban thriller. The films introduces key characters by focusing in on them and their activities around the yard/school. Also the opening sequence uses the activities which are taking place to generate interest, the viewer wants to know why they are doing these things. Dialogue also adds to the viewers curiosity as characters are making plans which will take place later in the film. Also electronic music, and city background noise enforces the urban/city feel. Trainspotting
The start of this film begins during a chase scene in a city street, the characters are being chased by police this is both exciting and tells the viewer that the characters in focus have committed crime. Upbeat music plays which was a popular song at time of the films release. Each important character is introduced with their nickname displayed on screen E.g. Sick Boy, Renton. The intro continues showing what the characters do and shows them being loud which gives an idea of what each character is like. The intro also features drug use in a derelict building, from this you know drug use is a prominent feature in this films. Lock, Stock, Load and Two Smoking Barrels
This sequence has no music or background noise in the trailer, only one of the main characters. The character is shouting aloud to a group of people crowded round, selling what look to be stolen goods from a suitcase on a table. Earning money is a theme of this film, and also from the character accent and the way he speaks adds to the urban atmosphere/feel. Titles play in between this scene, but no character names are mentioned, you know which are key characters because of the camera movement.

Tuesday, 7 February 2012

Movie Questionnaire

In order to gain feedback on our movie so far (brief synopsis) and what they would like to see in an Urban Thriller I have produced a video questionnaire which can be answered by viewers in the comments or on our Blog.
I will also post the questionnaire in text format below.


-Answer Below-
Q1) How old are you?
Q2) What gender are you?
Q3) What is your current occupation?
Q4) Where are you from?
Q5) What kind of films do you enjoy?
Q6) Where do you watch films?
Q7) What do you think of our storyline?
"The main story is set after a drug deal gone wrong, putting two of the characters against each other. One of the characters, Paddy owes money to a drug dealer called Barry. Barry, due to coincidence finds Paddy in a council estate. A chase scene commences where Barry chases Paddy down, and makes him a proposition (after beating him up). If Paddy finds £56,000 by noon the next day her won't kill him. A twist in the movie shows Barry, being double crossed bu his superiors and Paddy and Barry team together to defeat the mobsters. (90 Mins)
Q8) What genre would you say this movie is?
Q9) What certificate would you want this movie to be?
Q10) Would you be interested in watching this movie?

Thursday, 2 February 2012

Our Film Classification

Looking into the content of the BBFC and their guidelines (which can be found below), we have aimed to give our film the certification of 15.

Discrimination
The BBFC prohibits the use of discrimination (racism etc) in a 15 certification film, we were careful to avoid this in order to achieve the certificate we intended, as this would make our film an '18'.

Drugs
Our film also incorporates the selling of drugs and suggested use, based on the BBFC's guidelines our film will still meet the requirements of a 15 certificate film by their standards.

Language
The film would have also featured strong language, the strongest of which being the word, 'cunt' however as its use could not be justified, we have replaced it with another less offensive word in order to keep it at, the much more popular certificate of, 15.

Violence
Our film will features a few violent scenes necessary to the progression of the story. However these scenes will not show excessive/ strong gore or focus on the pain of the victim as such things would result in the film being classed as an '18'. Avoiding these meant we could keep our 15 certification.

Our film will not feature horror, sex, nudity or imitable behaviour.

Based on what we have discussed here we are confident that our film meets the requirements of a 15 film.

Certificate 18

Certificate 15

Certificate 12




Friday, 27 January 2012

Research into Similar Films.

The film is a urban thriller, to aid us in creating our film and staying true to the genre in am researching films which have already been made in this genre.
A few british Urban Thrillers are ones such as:

Dead Man's Shoes (Warp):
A disaffected soldier (Considine) returns to his hometown to get even with the thugs who brutalized his mentally-challenged brother (Kebbell) years ago.
Review at: http://www.guardian.co.uk/film/2004/oct/03/philipfrench
Official Website: http://www.shanemeadows.co.uk/deadman.htm

KiDULTHOOD:
A day in the life of a group of troubled 15-year-olds growing up in west London.
Review at: http://www.guardian.co.uk/film/movie/110817/kidulthood
Official Website: http://www.kidulthood.co.uk/

Shifty:
Shifty, a young crack cocaine dealer in London, sees his life quickly spiral out of control when his best friend returns home.
Review at:http://www.telegraph.co.uk/culture/culturecritics/timrobey/5207893/Shifty-review.html
Official Website: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Shifty/44156913253

Film certification.




Discrimination

Discriminatory language or behaviour must not be endorsed by the work as a whole. Aggressive discriminatory language or behaviour is unlikely to be acceptable unless clearly condemned.

Drugs

Any misuse of drugs must be infrequent and should not be glamorised or give instructional detail.

Horror

Moderate physical and psychological threat may be permitted, provided disturbing sequences are not frequent or sustained.

Imitable behaviour

Dangerous behaviour (for example, hanging, suicide and self-harming) should not dwell on detail which could be copied, or appear pain or harm free. Easily accessible weapons should not be glamorised.

Language

Moderate language is allowed. The use of strong language (for example, ‘fuck’) must be infrequent.

Nudity

Nudity is allowed, but in a sexual context must be brief and discreet.

Sex

Sexual activity may be briefly and discreetly portrayed. Sex references should not go beyond what is suitable for young teenagers. Frequent crude references are unlikely to be acceptable.

Theme

Mature themes are acceptable, but their treatment must be suitable for young teenagers.

Violence

Moderate violence is allowed but should not dwell on detail. There should be no emphasis on injuries or blood, but occasional gory moments may be permitted if justified by the context. Sexual violence may only be implied or briefly and discreetly indicated, and must have a strong contextual justification.